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N lands comes through even The problem is that it just looks accidental rather than a deliberate style enhancement and it s harder to read the book right through as the clunk is constantly in the background Celebrated works across the years from Jules Verne to Philippe Djian don t clunk They may or may not have been better authors but they did it differentlyIt s uite a hard thing when a pointless amateur book reviewer who deserves to be ignored recommends a major change to an author but here oes The first thing to do is convert this into a screenplay because cool characters from several countries speaking their second language the only one they all have in common would be radical and convey a sense of their travels and experiences in addition to the lines they are delivering Imagine Reservoir Dogs with the membership coming from many countries It s interesting to hear this style spoken when it originates from the characters It *S Not Effective When Written In A Book Because It *not effective when written in a book because it all be blamed on the narrator The second recommendation the painful one is to change the way the book is written Write it in flowing Italian to avoid the freuent short sentences and then translate it into English word for word and then find another writer who is a native speaker of English to re write the story so it flows fluidly as if it were written by a natural I don t expect the author to do this as it s like letting someone else ride away on your new bicycle but I think it is what it will take for this author to be accepted and recognised for the Feel The Heat good story and imaginative content he has written at least in the ignorant English speaking markets A thriller no matter how worthy that isn t easy toet into will have a hard time against all the competition I m seeing nowadays I could be sarcastic and add there are authors that readers but the thriller All Natural Murder (A Blossom Valley Mystery genre it isn t uite that saturated yet Noteworthy it has to be an easy read to break throughThere youo I ve written way too much about the style and hardly touched the content It s a "Thriller With Reasonable Pace And "with reasonable pace and that makes you think about city hopping to see the little bridges canals and houseboats to speculate on their shady secrets and uiet occupants who act calm in the face of adversity It s a fun ride as these thrillers should be which is why it deserves three stars anywayThese uotes are included as examples of text that I don t think sounds natural with the intent to steal the formula at all costs thus the Give it Up (The Thorne Brothers, gun explaining that wool sweater that showed off out her form the nickname mad detective fit her like alove and was man of apparent age thirty five years the police have opened an investigation examining the evidence found you spurt happiness from every pore Pygmalion But why et into this circle when she was already in high class one to what purpose and they just spoke ear to ear It s the language of your friend from the caf but I would clean it up for publication Buy it anyway and read the book for the story Fall in love with Holland and die It s fun than pedantic old London Wesley has just been released from a psychiatric hospital two years after being admitted His life was full of medications and the feeling that he didn t belong there and upon his release he discovers the truth about the horrors of this institution and the experiments that were performed on patientsIt was a chance meeting when he met Megan or was it Beautiful wealthy and with a funhouse of moods and personality one never knew what to expect from her When Wesley becomes involved in a cl. Olved in lots of intrigues will they fall in love And will Wes succeed in solving all the troubles these criminal have involved .
Ll of us who d like to see what Amsterdam is like when *You Don T Have *don t have eyes of a tourist Great let s oI can t help wondering why the events of the story don t attract police interest though An explosion in a capital city for example would be international news and a messy would be international news and a messy would leave witnesses spending 12 hours in the police station re tracing events They wouldn t be asked to do this if they had escaped the scene so that s probably the if they had escaped the scene so that s probably the I m feeling around for but Themes from a Letter to Rome going to chat about an alarming event afterwards in a cafe calmly without any sirens in the background and with no nasty uestions is a little light touch Then again no one bothers James Bond with this sort of low level nuisance either so the poets of entertainment have a licence Iuess There s also a fair amount of description about what A Warriner to Protect Her (The Wild Warriners girls are wearing and compliments about models of car again channeling spy movies then even a vodka martiniets in on the action I should clarify that the book is its own entity not a copy of Fleming or anything else but subconscious Bond stuff is around them almost as a metaphor for the adventure normal people thrown into a dangerous world of international danger and flashing jewels Exciting yes Would you call the police and Essential LINQ go into hiding end of story boring or skid off in the Aston Martin with the wind in your hair spin through alleyways and knock over some cardboard boxes I can t criticise the recurring car awareness then because that s likely to be normal in city street fiction and I m just not seeing it very often in the sci fi theme I m usually into As for the strong feminist temptation to criticise the threeirls teasing posing trying to attract attention and making the first move on the poor boy although I d like to complain that it s demeaning and no one does that in the real world I ve had a ood honest think and decided to avoid the subject altogether and not be hypocriticalThe positive stuff makes for a ood plot and a rollercoaster story so far so Afternoons with the Blinds Drawn good but now I have to mention the elephant in the room Think about how hard it is to write a book in your second or third language the one you were not brought up with as a native speaker Could you do this I couldn t even dream about the challenge of writing prose directly in Italian or Dutch at least thirty years of study right there Jules Verne producedreat works in English absolutely but he wrote them all in French couldn t read English and didn t make a direct translation instead employing another to make his French phrases read as if they d been penned by a native speaker of English In this book Marco Marek has tried to master a challenge that the likes of Verne declined to attempt to write directly in a studied second tongue The trouble is I don t think it reads well at all This issue isn t about content excitement or originality Specifically when a native speaker of English reads it the story sounds uite clunky and distracts from what is PatternReview.com 1,000 Clever Sewing Shortcuts and Tips going on in the scene To back up my view I ll add some sample clunky sentences belowThe problem with the flow of the tale can also become the solution just by turning it around in your mind The storytelling style re creates the impression of sitting in a cafe in Holland and being told an engaging anecdote by your close friend from Holland who isn t as fluent in English as they like to think they are That s suddenly fine then isn t it It s better to hear a continental story from a continental voice and that s a realistic illusion for the reader because the atmosphere of immersion in colourful foreig. Haan Psychiatric Hospital He met Megan right after a beautiful but uirkyirl and high risk life loverTogether they will be inv. .

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Amsterdam Wesley Wes Wooter patient Personality DO Was Waiting For DO was waiting for patient processing clerk Bulgaria to et done with his paperwork Julia had his suitcase in hand He was free at last from Haan Psychiatric Hospital Ooster ParkIt wasn t long Wes met Detective Megan De KuipA male 35 had been found murdered at the Haan Psychiatric Hospital HPH Eva Wes cousin prostitute had found a key a noteWes her headed for the *Train Station To Find The Locker A Briefcase A Notebook *station to find the locker A briefcase a notebook did Cindy reveal about KAZWhat did Mr Voronin say to WesWarning This book contains extremely raphic adult content violence or expletive language or uncensored sexually explicit material which is only suitable for mature readers It may be offensive to some readers I did not receive any type of compensation for reading reviewing this book While I receive free books from publishers authors I am under no obligation to write a positive review only an honest one All thoughts opinions are entirely my ownA very awesome book cover Beast Protector (Shifter Legends, great font writing style A very well written thrillersuspense book It was very easy for me to readfollow from startfinish never a dull moment There were norammartypo errors nor any repetitive or out of line seuence sentences Lots of exciting scenarios with several twiststurns a Senja dan Cinta yang Berdarah great set of uniue characters to keep track of This could also make anotherreat crime mystery movie or better yet a mini TV series There is no doubt in my mind this is a very easy rating of 5 stars Thank you for the free Goodreads Making Connections Author ARC PDF book Tony Parsons MSW Washburn I knew she was a irl who liked to live her life on a wire or better a razor blade Necessary spoilers are included in this first paragraph only This novel by an Italian author writing in English about adventure in The Netherlands sets off immediately with a well constructed starting point to engage the reader exploring the hopefully fictional nightmare that through either an error or by deliberate corruption two doctors in agreement do have the power to diagnose or misdiagnose a patient as having a severe mental disorder remove their liberty and banish them to an institution where others have control over their life indefinitely With the stigma and powerlessness this diagnosis brings it would then be exceptionally difficult for any inmate to have that ruling overturned unless they had support and funding from tenacious and loyal friends It s a strong scenario because it s a credible fear just as being buried alive is a fear that s unlikely but not impossible it s a credible fear just as being buried alive is a fear that s unlikely but not impossible the author adds another level of tension Something s being done to the psychiatric patients This raises a further and older fear from Napoleonic times of procedures medicines and even tortures being tested on convicts lives devalued Having primed the coiled spring the cat is cast amongst the pigeons and the journey begins when a patient unexpectedly wins his reprieve and walks out of the clinic taking his suspicions into the real world with himAs a series of action scenes and with an unfolding mystery that s tricky to predict it works With Wesley a lead character who ets bounced between a hardened Damned Strong Love gang his women another hardenedang and their spoils all set against a backdrop of Amsterdam s canals houseboats and a warehouse full of cheese so Dutch I liked it This story isn t supposed to be another Van Der Valk because these are not professional detectives but amateurs caught up in someone else s scheming although it serves the same ideal a puzzle to solve within a travelogue for It's a uiet life in the Amsterdam's canals but Wesley didn't know what to expect just released from being unfairly locked away at. ,